writing week 8

Hi this is my writing week 8 part 2.

grinning with pure enjoyment the two cheeky kids laughed and never seemed to stop saying in high pitched voices "wow there's a house " and wow that's what the museum looks like from all the way up here. Then something horrible happened the boy on the left (who was called Jeremy ) started to fall! Then the other boy laughed and said "good joke but I know you are tied" Jeremy laughed dangling procerisly on the edge then the plane started to slow down and they realised we are landing.