writing week 8 part two

Hi this is my writing week 8 that I have been working on for a while.
Bye, Matilda.

Slowly the Delicate ocean started to turn into hard sand and the colourful fish darting in and out of the sea turned into dead branches. Changing quickly the sky turned a shade of black. Sighing the old man attempted to jump out of the rickety old boat but instead landed on his face then something alarming happened. He started to sink his body began to disappear under the sand and he started to shout in a  attempt to escape the dangerous quick sand before it swallowed him whole.