Hello this is my post about a piece of writing that I wrote and really enjoyed it. A challenge I faced was thinking of lots of good describing words. Have you ever seen a fish like this? I learned that it is very hard to think of a describing word for yellow. I enjoyed trying find good words that I hadn't seen before.
Bye, Matilda.🦦
I was swimming cautiously through the endless ocean looking around for new species or at least a dolphin when I was suddenly looking into the beady yellow eyes of the rumoured diabolical terrifying fish of the deep. It was giant and mismatched and slightly terrifying. It had a bulging forehead and miniscule yellow eyes, torn and tender dark fins. It’s lips were huge and bulbous and they matched perfectly with the deep vibrant ocean that surrounded it. Many many people had searched for this rumoured individual fish. Scientists had searched and searched for a look at this fish, a tiny snippet of information regarding what species of fish this was. My name is Cari and I discovered the rumored fish of the deep… My grandmother devoted her life to finding this unique fish and since I found it I felt slightly guilty of the fact I discovered the fish and my grandmother searched for 40 years for it but then I heard her sweet reassuring voice in my head saying “congratulations” and for a second I thought I saw her face smiling at me.
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