Saturday, 8 August 2020

the disintegrating skeleton

Hi this is my writing that I LOVED doing. I posted this because I liked the words that I used and one of my favourite words was in there. Disintegrating. I found it hard to think of very good words.  
Bye, Matilda🐼🐰

Disintegrated and rotten the old grimy skeleton lay there on the hard flattened ground while mist drifted over it making strange shapes that would scare any human. Trekking along the girl shrugged off her fur cloak and sat down breathing hard. She had finally found her life's work, her greatest discovery yet. Looking over at the skeleton that lay there not moving she wondered what it was. People in the small village over the mountains had seen it course but had never understood what it was some of them said it was a dinosaur but others said it was a giant lobster but all of them agreed that it was ancient . They had called in archaeologists and paleontologists to study it and tell them what it was but none of them knew what the colossal ancient skeleton was.


1 comment:

  1. Ka pai Matilda. You have used some great vocabulary. Was that your learning intention? Your story got me wondering how long the explorer had been looking for this skeleton. And I wonder how the people in the village explained it?

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