Sunday, 30 August 2020

sick sentences

 Hi these are my sick sentences that I liked doing because I liked seeing the difference of the original sentences and the new sentences.  I found it hard to think of a sentence for the walking on mars sentence. Have you done sick sentences before?

Bye, Matilda.πŸ†


Original sentences.
The astronaut wore a suit. It was uncomfortable and warm. The astronaut walked on Mars.

My sentences.
Bulky and white the astronaut looked at his thick suit with distaste edged on his face. Warm and uncomfortable it felt sticky and awkward like when you were wet woolen clothes. Mars was strange but walking on it was even stranger.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Matilda, great sentences! You gave us a way into imagining wearing a spacesuit (something few of us have ever done) by using an everyday item like heavy, wet wool. Ka pai

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  2. Hey Matilda, Sarah from Rm 6 here, WOW those are some awesome sentences, very detailed!.
    What's something you would change on it???
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    BB4N= bye bye for now
    GTR= gotta run
    SYL= see you later

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