my story

Hi this is my story that I have been working on for a while. I liked doing this because I could decide what the story was about and who was in it. If you could make a story like this then who would be in your story?
Bye, Matilda.

Ronnie was looking at Bartholomew with a thoughtful expression on her face, then she blurted out "do you think that we should go to school with Bradley"? As the porcelain bear considered she said "I think we should because he seems to be getting new friends and we both know that we are Bradley's only friends forever". Bartholomew thought for a second then grinned and told her "I agree we might even be able to have a talk to that teacher of his Mrs Ebble". The next day Ronnie and Bartholomew set off into his bag where they got themselves comfortable and began to eat the paper cuttings that Bradley had generously provided for them yesterday and looked like a writing test.

 Suddenly the bag began to move and they were stuck. Ronnie fell on Bartholomew and her other ear fell off shattering into many pieces as it hit the metal water bottle jammed into the space next to the lunch box and a large book called my parents stole a elephant. As quickly as it had started the bag stopped and shoved roughly into what felt like a locker. Slowly Ronnie and Bartholomew climbed out then realized that they were trapped metal walls surrounded them and so did many other things such as bubble gum which was turning brown torn pages of books and many other things the most exciting things were a stack of two dollar coins. There wasn't anything that could get them out just random stuff that Bradley had collected during his school life. Suddenly the door flew open and Bradley looked inside then seeing his to toys he sweared loudly . Ronnie tried to silence him but it was no use then to make in worse Mrs Ebble stormed down the corridor and grabbed Bradley by the shoulder moving him away from the locker.

Then they heard running foot steps and Bradley came running down the corridor out of breath he grabbed his bag and stuffed his two toys into it then he slug his bag onto his back and began to sprint the rounded a corner and slammed a door. Ronnie and Bartholomew stuck there heads out and looked around. The floor was covered in velvet with pink toilet seats and gold sinks then they understood they were in the girls bath room. Sure enough when they looked around There was a blue sign with a picture of a person wearing a dress. There was a click and a girl with brown hair tied neatly into plats and with a red t-shirt and yellow shorts appeared from a cubicle at the very back of the room then she saw Bradley and screamed.