Hi this is my 2 mice story that I have been working on for a while. Last week on Friday we had Mr P in our class and we did some writing about two mice and the picture won the animal of the year award in 2012. Do you think that they are fighting or dancing?
Mouse one
The cheese was sitting just there and if the other mouse sitting nearby didn’t decide to fight me then I would be digging my teeth into it’s soft tangy cheesy goodness but no she had to come and steal it.
Mouse two
I can’t believe it what cheek, I was walking around the train station looking for a meal and I saw a piece of cheese sitting there and no one else was around so I went over and before I knew it some other mouse had snuck up on me and bought me to the ground shouting “ cheese stealer” but then I jumped back up and bared my fluffy fists.
I can’t be believe it I was just protecting what was rightfully mine then that other mouse came along and tried to steal it. So I did what any mouse would do and pounced. She fell to the ground and then jumped up bearing her dangerous fists.
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I can’t believe it what cheek, I was walking around the train station looking for a meal and I saw a piece of cheese sitting there and no one else was around so I went over and before I knew it some other mouse had snuck up on me and bought me to the ground shouting “ cheese stealer” but then I jumped back up and bared my fluffy fists.
I can’t be believe it I was just protecting what was rightfully mine then that other mouse came along and tried to steal it. So I did what any mouse would do and pounced. She fell to the ground and then jumped up bearing her dangerous fists.
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