my writing

Hi this is my writing that I have been working on for a while. I really enjoyed doing this because I could come up with my own ideas. Have you ever done this?

Bye, Matilda.









It all happened so quickly! One minute he was standing on the platform, the next he was hurtling through the air, hanging on for dear life… I opened my mouth to let out a scream but nothing came out. Suddenly a piece of half eaten pizza hurtled towards my face. I lifted up my hand to protect myself without realising I had let go now my body was shooting threw the air nearing a pole rising out of the ground. Then I got my voice back “help” I screamed it in a bloodcurdling manner. Half of the people on the platform looked around but there was nothing they could do but call a ambulance. The last thing that I remember about that day was laying on my back looking up at the ceiling with a bright white light shining on my head and hearing concerned voices around me. Now that’s all that I can remember.