Hi this is my writing that I have been working on for a while. I enjoyed doing this because I could come up with my own idea. Have you done this picture before?
Bye, Matilda.
As I walked along the street my friend ran up to me panting and sweat dripped from her forehead she fell to her knees and gasped “the street it’s gone.” I laughed what “do you mean the street is gone?'' she replied “look around.” I grunted “fine”. I turned my head around getting ready to blurt out something but nothing came out of my dry lips. She was right the Piece by piece, the street was disappearing. My eyes googled and I just stood there suddenly a huge piece right under me gave way and my friend and I were plummeting into the darkness.
Hi Matilda, remember when you cut and paste text on to your blog use the "paste without formatting" or Ctrl + Shft + V and then your text won't run off the page. Can you please try that and I will read your creative writing? thanks : )
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