week 6 writing

Hi this is my writing week six that I have been working on for a while. The reason I haven't put this up yet is  that I forgot to.
Bye, Matilda

A horrible crunching sound exploded from the deck wood started fly around the shattered old ship. Slowly the mast strarted to collaspe then it tumbled onto  the wavy sea. Looking up at the shadowy sky a saw a jagged line of electricity forking across the dark sky it felt like The Earth began to shatter then waves started to fall onto the cabins as the people shivvering there screamed. Staggering out of the soaked cabins the people saw a even worse sight waves were subsiding over the deck and wood and people started to fly over into the raging sea. Deckchairs were thrown into to try and save everyone being thrown about “it was like a fair ground ride they” said after  but then the added “but the kinds that people never go on unless they were dared to. Then one last wave came capsided into the ocean.