writing week 5

Hi this is my wring week 5 that I have been working on for a while. this week we did the circle of flames here's the picture and writing.
Bye, Matilda
A deafening sound echoed through the hallways it said “you can’t get me now Winston you will never be able to get the winning Hitler” people started to scream. I staggered  into a room I looked around flames were engulfing it and lonely light was shining onto the dangerous flames. Pushing down a chair onto the flames I ran across it then when there was a moments silence I heard a ticking sound it was coming from the left side of the room. struggling over under a burning table was a stick of dynamite I yelled in shock then a man opened the door he steeped inside his black shoes clacked along the bare floor boards and he said in a greedy voice “well well well what do we have here” it was Hitler a smug look on his face suggested that he was the one that had set fire to the head quarters then without warning he grabbed a rope and threw it around me he knotted so tight it seemed to dig into my skin then he bundled me over his shoulder and set off out of the collapsing door.