Kate Shepard sick sentences

Hi this is my Kate Shepard sick sentences this is the original sentences. And I am going to rewrite them using show not tell

The woman pulled the world along a road. There was a city ahead. The sky was cloudy.

Tugging and pulling it seemed to the world that Kate Shepard never stopped pulling.

Looming in front of her was a broken down place covered in wet moss.

Cracks of thunder roared over her head and her hair started to weigh down with rain.