this is my six sentences that is part of my story stranded I haven't finished the story though. I found this enjoyable because I got to make up lots of words .
As I stared with my eyes as open as possible so I could spot anything an island or even a rock sticking out of the sea then I stared my mouth let out a yell of shock as I said an island a sandy island.
As I stared with my open I saw the beauty of the island the trees swayed and as I looked harder I saw hard brown coconuts and delicate mangoes sitting on the untouched trees
As I jumped off our boat that was falling apart my feet felt great as they sank into the sand as I sat down the waves lapped lazily on my toes gradely moving up to my ankles. The clear sky began to get darker and darker.
Dear Matilda It me,Luke from room 25
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog post about your story about the image stranded. Sounds cool I would like it if you could add more to the story, I would like to read that maybe find a treasure and when they touch it flying monkey bat attack them or something, but of course that's up to you
Blog you later-Luke
Hi Luke thank you for your comment,
DeleteA challenge I faced well doing this was thinking of good words to use. I will think about using that idea. Blog you later, Matilda